Great style, weak ending
I can even smell the inspiration on Tim Burton's work on this flash, and it was really well done. I seem to love the little island you made, reminds me a lot to Nightmare Before Christmas.
The music by Danny Elfman made obvious that you were inspired by his work, even in storytelling since you used his compositor.
The story was going well, but the ending was bad. I see that you've lost interested on it, it's sad. It was going really well.